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Senast redigerad av LordOfTheIdiots 2020-12-21 kl. 23:46.
Senast redigerad av LordOfTheIdiots 2020-12-21 kl. 23:46.
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men först, alltid en dusch, inte lukta usch står högt i kurs
I övrigt håller jag med ang väl genomtänkta rim på rätt plats, det skapar ett visst Flow och kan förhöja texten.
Jag tror jag gillar mest när det inte rimmar så värst mycket, följt av några rader med flera rim på samma stavelse kan vara väldans fränt.. Men att rimma bara för att rimma.. Nja, pass på den
Bob Dylan fick Nobelpriset för sina rim 
Ja, den här innehåller många bra rim:
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Om han förtjänade Nobelpriset vet jag dock inte...
The guilty undertaker sighs
The lonesome organ grinder cries
The silver saxophones say I should refuse you
The cracked bells and washed-out horns
Blow into my face with scorn
But it's not that way
I wasn't born to lose you
I want you, I want you
I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
The drunken politician leaps
Upon the streets where mothers weep
And the saviors who are fast asleep
They wait for you
And I wait for them to interrupt
Me drinkin' from my broken cup
And ask me to open up the gate for you
I want you, I want you
Yes, I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
Now your dancing child with his Chinese suit
He spoke to me, I took his flute
No, I wasn't very cute to him, was I?
But I did it because he lied
Because he took you for a ride
And because time was on his side
And because I...
Want you, I want you
Yes, I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
The lonesome organ grinder cries
The silver saxophones say I should refuse you
The cracked bells and washed-out horns
Blow into my face with scorn
But it's not that way
I wasn't born to lose you
I want you, I want you
I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
The drunken politician leaps
Upon the streets where mothers weep
And the saviors who are fast asleep
They wait for you
And I wait for them to interrupt
Me drinkin' from my broken cup
And ask me to open up the gate for you
I want you, I want you
Yes, I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
Now your dancing child with his Chinese suit
He spoke to me, I took his flute
No, I wasn't very cute to him, was I?
But I did it because he lied
Because he took you for a ride
And because time was on his side
And because I...
Want you, I want you
Yes, I want you so bad
Honey, I want you
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Senast redigerad av hvita.nhegrer 2020-12-22 kl. 06:54.
Senast redigerad av hvita.nhegrer 2020-12-22 kl. 06:54.
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Nobelpriset
Men det finns ju en jäkla rytm i musik och rim hos Dylan, som "I Want You". En fascinerande låt är "Shelter from the Storm", första versen:'Twas in another lifetime, one of toil and blood
When blackness was a virtue the road was full of mud
I came in from the wilderness, a creature void of form
Come in, she said
I'll give ya shelter from the storm
http://www.bobdylan.com/songs/shelter-storm/
Och det finns många fler där rimmen är framträdande, men sällan "nödrim"
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